Q3 - What have you learnt from your audience feedback?
I also received some feedback from a random sample of people who were in my target audience (16-20 year olds); some of the things that were said were:
"Editing nice & snappy"
"All transitions on the beat except for one which occurs in the scene with Hal"
"The sound throughout is clear"
"When Mon is speaking her voice needs to be made slightly louder for added clarity"
"Shot with Grimmers twirling the bag of drugs is a bit to long"
"Add in title cards to help string the story lines together"
"Good acting"
These are just some of the feedback that was given once the rough cut had been watched; taking a lot of this on board I then changed a number of things. Firstly, I added in title cards to help bring each storyline together and to make it much clearer for the viewer what is going on. Secondly, I shortened to clip with the drugs in and edited the sound on the scene with Mon consequently making her voice seem louder. Last of all I changed the length of one of my transitions so that it fell exactly on the beat this made the whole trailer run smoother.
Below is an image of the feedback I received from my peers:
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